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Offline Phoenix

Failing poetry (for giggles and fun..)
« on: July 04, 2019, 01:35:04 PM »
So! -exasperated sighing-

I have a gazzzzzillion scribbles with beginnings of poems/songs that I wrote years ago that are highly unlikely to ever be finished. Either I've been unhappy or just unable to think of where it needs to head next, which has meant they've been left unfinished and gathering dust.

This thread is simply to have some fun.
I'm going to be posting whatever entries I can, and if you can help to complete them (serious or if you make something up purely for fun) then by all means go ahead! I'm open to reading whatever you can think of.

Once I'm happy with the length, I'll copy the poem out as a whole piece and move on to another.

Lets begin shall we!


Forgotten beginning
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Offline Phoenix

Forgotten beginning
« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2019, 01:36:38 PM »
They are the first steps to a forgotten beginning,
Ones we knew would keep us from winning,
Our future would seem uncertain it's true,

That's it! Three lines. Who'll  be the first to post up?   :read1:

Offline newchinaren

Re: Failing poetry (for giggles and fun..)
« Reply #2 on: July 05, 2019, 06:18:23 PM »
... but for the moment I just need to poo.

 :thanks:  You're welcome.  And...

Once I'm happy with the length,

Yes, that's what all the girls tell me. :whaaa:
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