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Offline Phoenix

Re: ~Foundation: Introduction~
« Reply #20 on: February 11, 2019, 03:15:31 PM »
I could really use with some feedback on this if anyone is able to take a look? This one is actually flowing for me again, so please take a look if you can.  :ninja:

Offline Phoenix

:Chapter three: Spreading the heartbreak
« Reply #21 on: February 14, 2019, 04:45:56 AM »
   Gregg lay back, and rested his head on the thin pillow behind him. He could hear words-answers escaping his lips for questions that Sarah was asking him, but the voice-his voice didn’t sound like his own.
   It was as though his body was shutting down. Defeated and broken, it was simply going through the motions to survive a little longer.
   “Gregg, we need to know where it hurts,” Sarah waited for a moment before continuing. “Is it just your leg?”
   Unwilling to break away from the ‘trance-like’ state that his mind had put him in, he nodded-lying to the two of them as he did so.
   In truth, the pain was spreading all over. His fractured left leg definitely hurt the most, but everywhere else came a close second.

   He breathed in deeply, and closed his eyes for a moment. The denial spreading through him was threatening to cloud his judgement on what had just happened entirely, ensuring that breaking the news to his brother would be not only impossible, but also a form of blessing.
   “How are you feeling?” Sarah asked. Gregg focused on her soft voice, quivering slightly with unease as they travelled to the hospital.
   For at least a short while, she was to care for him. It was her job to make him comfortable, and take away any pain that he was experiencing, and she felt privileged to be doing so.
   The problem was, she could tell that he was not being completely honest with her. His eyes had a distant look upon them, which only seemed to be growing.

   Gregg kept his eyes closed, as he took a few deep breaths.
   “Numb,” he replied as he thought to himself.
   No longer able to say anything further, he instead stared at the ambulance doors in front of him. And began to feebly hope that maybe, just maybe-when they opened once more, that he would discover it had all been a cruel joke.

{~}

   Andi slid into the jumper that he had hung on Mike’s door silently, and inspected the room carefully. It was peaceful, apart from the rain that could be heard as it softly pattered the ground and window outside. It was almost calming, which was eerie to think of considering something serious had just happened.
   The atmosphere was thick with uncertainty and doubt, with the ever looming unwelcome news edging closer with every second that passed.
   It seemed so surreal, to not be with his family right now. The dynamics were changing, and he needed their reassurance that it would all be okay.

   Jennifer held her breath for a moment and looked in at Andi, who was standing to one side. She wanted to say something, to assure him that it was all okay, but she simply couldn’t. The concern, and urgency in the nurses voice on the other end of the phone had told her that something was wrong- desperately wrong. And that they needed to leave as soon as possible.
   Unable to trust herself to speak, she simply placed her hand on his shoulder and stayed as he turned around to face her, it was time to leave.

-

   The three of them sat down inside the car without a word, and forced themselves to shut the doors. None of them wanted to be facing the situation in front of them, and were all unable to trust themselves to speak.
   Jennifer, to ease the tension slightly-revved the engine up and placed music on to drown the silence. She had thought to put the radio on originally, although she quickly dismissed the idea. Most of the discussions that would be playing would be talking about the storm, which she felt was a bad idea to be reminded about.

   They set off cautiously, as Jennifer watched the roads-keeping an eye for upcoming obstacles. Along the way, she spotted firefighters and other local business owners, trying to clear the wreckage left behind. The rain and treacherous weather had passed, all that remained now was the debris.
   The path to the hospital was therefore mostly clear, apart from the odd leaves from the fallen trees, and rubbish from the bins that had been knocked over.

{~}

   Sarah and Henry pulled into the hospital with a solemn heart, but knowing they had a purpose and job to do. Gregg, although not visibly showing signs of pain, had done beforehand. And they both worried that the shock of what had happened was starting to take it’s toll.
   Encouraging him to speak and keep his eyes open hadn’t worked as much as Sarah had hoped, it was only a matter of time before the full effect was shown.
   Henry stepped out and opened the doors, to the back of the ambulance. Instantly Gregg looked up, Half hoping, half expecting them to reveal his parents standing and waiting for him. Instead, he was greeted with strangers. Nurses and doctors shivering outside in the cold, awaiting instructions and medical information so they could help him.
   In anger, and frustration, he closed his eyes.
   “This is really happening,” he told himself. “Why is it happening?
   He questioned the situation he was in without a word, the weight on his heart made it almost impossible for him to speak.
   Andi, did he know what was going on? Was he on his way?

   Unwilling to pay attention to his surroundings, he opened his eyes, and stared at the hospital ceiling. They were moving quickly, but in step with each other-a team of nine, working as one.
   Once on a hospital bed, Henry reached for the stretcher and began to wheel it away. Sarah however, hovered in the doorway. She glanced at her partner and began to frown and shake her head.
   “I can’t leave him,” she approached him. “Not like this, he’s completely alone.”
   “I completely understand,” he replied. “Listen, it’s the end of our shift now anyway. If you want to stay and hover around to keep an eye on him, then I’m not going to argue with your decision. If we’re needed, and get another call though-”
   “-I’ll be there,” she nodded.
   Satisfied, Henry then pushed the stretcher out of the double doors and left Sarah to decide where she wanted to stand so she was out of the way.

   Gregg was still watching the ceiling, although he did pay attention to a few things the doctors surrounding him were doing. They asked if he felt dizzy, he shook his head. When they asked him to follow the small torch, he complied and didn’t complain when all he could see was the remnants of the blinding light afterwards.
   Clothes were removed, questions were asked, information that he didn’t understand was exchanged.
   He was cold, in pain and battling with the right words inside his mind. How could he explain to Andi what had happened to their parents, if he still couldn’t believe it himself?
   He closed his eyes once more, feeling tears slide down his cheeks as he did so. Moments later he felt someone gently squeeze and hold onto his hand, and saw Sarah’s helpless and comforting gaze matching his own.
   Taking a deep breath, he brought his right hand up to wipe his eyes, stopping moments before his face. He stared for a moment and then looked away. Small cuts covered his palm, and spread a small way up his arm, and that was just from what he could immediately see.
   Gregg had blindly hoped that it was only his leg that had been injured, as he had tried to avoid looking at the state that he was really in. Seeing what his hand looked like though, made him realise that he was foolish to think so.

   The doctors were busying themselves as they attended the full extent of Gregg’s injuries. And, after a few moments of discussion between them, they announced that they couldn’t be sure of the full extent of the damage without a scan or an x-ray of some kind.
   “Here, this will make you feel better,” a nurse said soothingly. Gregg looked into her eyes and tried to smile, she was holding onto a blanket in her arms, which she unfolded as she continued to come closer.
   ‘Hannah Kitt’ her name tag announced.
   “Thank you,” Sarah said gratefully, as she helped to cover Gregg. “Gregg,” she said turning to him. “You need to have a few x-rays taken, especially on your leg.”
   “Are you staying?” Hannah asked her.
   “If Gregg wants me to,” she replied glancing at him once more.
   He nodded weakly, and bit his lip gently. She hadn’t been there from the start, but she was a welcome presence all the same.
   “It looks like I’m staying,” she weakly smiled.
   “Does-” Gregg began. His voice was rough and raw, and so he coughed a few times to try and help it. “Is Andi on his way?” he asked.
   “Yes, your friend’s mum answered. She should be driving down now,” Hannah replied. “Are you ready?”
   Gregg nodded in reply, and exhaled slowly as he let go of Jennifer’s hand. He had held onto the necklaces that he had taken time to remove off his parents in different places upon the trip to the hospital. Each time he had shifted their position, he found a different reason for holding onto them.
   The last place, was his left hand, which Sarah had held onto in a vain hope of comforting him.
   “Wait,” she said surprised. Gasping aloud, she unclenched her fingers to reveal two chains hanging from them-each one with a ring hanging upon them.
   “Look after them for me,” he replied weakly as he was wheeled away.

-

   Gregg was pushed out of the doors by a hospital porter, with only Hannah following beside him. The pain killers that he had been given were taking effect, although it was a gradual relief, not instant. It gave him the unfortunate ability to really focus on what his body was trying to tell him. Where did it hurt the most now?
   He didn’t really want to answer the question, as it would only make what was happening real. He was at the stage though, where he really didn’t have any other option. Andi needed to find out about their parents from him, not a total stranger.
   Their family had always been small and it felt like, to him, that it was his responsibility right now to be the one to let him know.

{~}

   Jennifer pulled into the hospital car park, and let the song that was playing finish before she turned the engine off. Nobody had said a word during the journey, as none were needed. And so instead they had let the silence spread.
   Once there wasn’t even an artist’s words and melodies to listen too though, that all changed.
   “The weather seems to have cleared up a little, we shouldn’t get too wet going inside.” Jennifer thought aloud. “Are you two ready?”
   “I guess,” Andi replied quietly. After taking a deep breath, he hung his head gently and opened the car door to be faced with a cold breeze that caught him off guard for a moment.
   “Are you okay?” Mike asked him.
   “No,” he replied nervously, “What do you think happened?”
   “I’m really not sure, it could be anything. Hopefully when we find your parents they can explain,” he offered.
   “We won’t know for sure until we head inside,” Jennifer said as she swung her legs out of the vehicle and stood up. “I’ll be back in a moment,” she announced briskly.
   The two of them remained where they were as she walked away to buy a parking ticket, which allowed Mike to voice a concern that had been buried ever since the initial phone call.

   He stepped around the outside of the vehicle and leant against the car, taking a deep breath as he did so.
   “I’ve never seen mum like this,” he said quietly. “She sounds so worried right now, it really isn’t like her.”
   “Do you think she knows what happened, and doesn’t want to tell me?”
   “No,” Mike replied. “She would have told you if she knew. Something is definitely off though.”
   He then sighed once more as he stood beside Andi, and slid his hands into the pockets of his jeans. Jennifer had started to walk back towards them, carrying a thin piece of paper in her hands,  and trying to conceal a very concerned expression on her face.
   “Come on you two, lets go inside shall we.” She then placed the ticket on the dashboard, and locked the car so they could all walk up together.

   The inside of the hospital was bustling with activity, with new and potential patients waiting to be seen on the many seats available. Many were wet, as Andi noticed as he walked past, even the ‘wet floor’ warning signs had been placed in various locations.
   To one side, a large wooden counter sat. The word ‘Reception’ stuck away ever so slightly, leaving just enough space that you could see what lay behind each of the plastic white letters.
   Jennifer hung her head slightly, and started walking towards the desk, which was also where most of the staff were gathered around.

   Andi hung back slightly, as a wave of dread spread throughout his body. Several of the doctors had glanced to face them as they approached, and each one turned away moments later and appeared to be discussing something very slightly out of earshot.
   “I think they know something,” he thought aloud.
   “What do you mean?” Mike asked him as he too stopped walking.
   “The doctors, they keep looking at me as if they know something. Like they know what happened to my family.”
   “Some of them would have to at least, if your family are here they would have to know why.”
   “I guess,” Andi sighed in defeat.
   Paranoia had been gradually winning over his heart, allowing fear to flow through his veins. His mum and dad could still be perfectly okay, and Gregg? He was a fighter, he probably only had a few  cuts and bruises if there was an accident. At least, that’s what he hoped would be the case.
   The doubts and suspicions were taking his mind into a state where he was doubtful of anything any more.
   He shook his head and closed his eyes, trying to rid himself of everything that was distracting him, but found that the thoughts only crept in again a moment later. Frozen to the spot, he simply watched as Jennifer asked someone where they should go.

   Moments later, Andi felt Mike’s hand on his shoulder. He sighed in defeat, unable to dredge his thoughts away from being negative as he had been swallowed by them, he started breathing deeply. Cold panic drained all the warmth away from his arms and legs, leaving his brain open to more horrible images.
   Brought back to reality, he brought his head up once more, and saw that Mike’s mum and a nurse were beside a pair of double doors waiting for them.

    Andi walked forwards towards Jennifer as he tried in vain to calm down. All he could hear was blood pulsing in his ears, as everything else just seemed muffled somehow.
   They walked together in a group down the hallway, passing several patients that were being taken to different parts of the hospital. Each one he made sure to check upon, as his eyes gazed over each individual, he checked to see if he knew them.
   A few smiled as they crossed paths, but Andi couldn’t return the gesture. He wanted too, but he simply couldn’t bring himself to do so.

   The nurse stopped walking as she stood beside a door with a small window. On the glass, the words; ‘Waiting room’ were stuck on the inside, although they were barely visible as blinds on the other side made it impossible to see them.
   “Someone will come for you in a moment,” she said feigning a smile as she did so.
   “Thank you Michelle,” Jennifer said gratefully.
    Smiling gently, she then checked the time on her watch, allowing both Mike and Andi to learn her name for a moment.
   Michelle Trent knew of the accident, and only wished she could do more to help. She, along with the other members of staff, had respected Gregg’s wishes to be the one to inform his brother of what had happened. They all knew how hard the job would be even with practice, let alone for a child to be the one breaking the news.
   She touched up her light brown hair, sliding a few lose strands behind her ears, before she bid farewell to the three of them. There wasn’t really anything else she could do, apart from see the end of her shift through and hope that the twins would be okay.

{~}

   As soon as Sarah was able to stay beside Gregg without any issues, she leapt at the chance. All through the check ups and tests, he had remained eerily quiet. The few words that he had spoken, were to simply answer questions, just like he had done in the ambulance.
   Otherwise he had remained utterly mute as he ran over every single heartbreaking way that he could break the news to his brother.
   He wanted and needed to be completely honest to him, and let him know everything that happened. The issue was, one side of him had shut some of the event behind a very solid locked door-and refused to open it.
   It was simply too painful to piece together, and he wasn’t thinking straight because of it.
   “Here,” Sarah said as calmly as she could. She then reached out for his hand once more, and placed the necklaces that he had told her to look after into the palm of his hand.
   Hannah glanced up as Gregg held them, taking a break from dressing his right arm as she did so. He smiled gently and frowned, had it only been a few hours before that that had set off? Why hadn’t his dad listened to him that morning?
   “Do you want the hospital to look after them until you’re okay to leave?” Hannah asked.
   “One of them,” Gregg replied quietly. “Andi needs to have the other.”
   “Do you want me to get him for you? he’s in the waiting room down the hall with your friend and his mother.”
   “Mike’s here?” he asked surprised. Then, after thinking for a moment he continued. “Of course he would be. Are they okay?”
   “They’re all fine, yes,” Hannah replied.
   Gregg took a deep breath, and shifted slightly as he lay down. As he did so, he saw that Hannah had just finished off dressing his arm and was now starting to pack the remaining unused dressings away.
   “Yes, you should get him. He’s probably really confused right now,” Gregg replied.
   “Do you want me to stay?” Sarah asked.
   “No, I’ll be-” he paused for a moment as he tried to find the right words. “I think-I think I just need to do this alone.”
   Sarah and Hannah nodded in understanding, and stood to leave. Neither had any comforting words to say, there weren’t any that would make the situation any less devastating than it already was.

-

      Hannah parted the curtains surrounding Gregg’s bed slowly as she half stepped through, and ushered someone to follow as she did. Gregg took a deep breath once more, this was it. Andi’s life was normal now, albeit confusing at the moment. As soon as he spoke the words though, the ones that explained what had happened only an hour or so ago, it would all change.
   Andi stepped through, and gasped in shock.
   “Are you okay?” he asked quickly.
   “I’ll leave you two alone for a moment,” Hannah announced as calmly as she could. She glanced to Gregg to see him nodding in understanding, then disappeared from view once more.
   Andi then took a few steps towards the end of Gregg’s bed and froze.
   “What’s wrong? What’s happened? Where are mum and dad?” he demanded in a panicked tone.
   “I don’t know,” Gregg choked. “I don’t know where they are,”
   “Didn’t they come with you? They should have driven at least two ambulances surely? Maybe they went to a different one?”
   “Andi-please, you need to listen-”
   “-I don’t need to do anything, just tell me where they are!” Andi growled, frustration growing clearer in his voice.
   “I don’t know!” Gregg cried out. “I had to leave them behind, I had to-”
   “-you had to leave them behind? How does that make sense? Why would you leave them?”
   “I’m trying to explain-”
   “-And why couldn’t someone else tell me? Maybe they would actually get on with it and let me know?”
   Gregg bit his lip as tears overwhelmed his vision once more. Why wasn’t Andi paying attention to what he was trying to say? He took a deep breath, and gingerly wiped his eyes with the side of his hand.
   “It was raining really heavily, I tried to tell dad not to drive but he just wanted to get home. He wouldn’t listen to me,” Greg began. Andi moved to the side of his bed, and leant on the metal frame. He was frustrated, and angry-but he couldn’t figure out why or who it was directed at. The emotions in his head were making it so he was lashing out at his brother, was it because he was the only one around that he could really vent at?
   “Okay, then what happened?”
   “Dad lost control,” Gregg bit the inside of his lip once more.
   “Are they okay?” Andi asked, concern visibly showing on his face.
   “-And we hit a tree that fell into the road,” Gregg continued, ignoring his brother’s question. Knowing if he did, he wouldn’t be able to get to what happened again. He needed to stay on track, to be able to explain it all. “Dad tried to get me to get some help, so I started knocking on a few doors-”
   “-And mum?” Andi cut in.
   “Andi,” Gregg paused. “They’re gone,” he continued quietly. After realising how silent his voice sounded, he tried repeating the words-only to find that they seemed to refuse being spoken any louder. Fortunately, Andi had managed to pick out what he was trying to say.
   “Gone? what do you mean they’re gone?”
   “They-they were both dead before the ambulance came,” Gregg replied heavily.
   “No, you’re joking-why would you say that?” Andi snapped. “Is this why everyone’s been staring at me? And acting strange? Were you laughing about me not knowing anything or something?”
   “No, I told them that I wanted to tell you-”
   “-So it was a secret?”
   “No, it wasn’t like that-” Gregg tried.
   “So you’re saying that keeping something from me isn’t a secret?”
   “Andi-”
   “-Gregg!” Andi cut in. “Do you realise how selfish you’re being right now? You wanted to be the one to tell me what happened, You kept it from me. All the doctors and nurses knew about it, so why didn’t I? They’re our parents, not just yours.”
   “I never claimed they were,” Gregg cried out. “I just wanted you to hear it from someone that you knew, someone that was there. I was thinking of you-”
   “-Yes, well you shouldn’t have.” Andi snapped. “Next time, just don’t bother. I’m fine on my own,” he growled.

   And then without another word, he turned around on his heels and stormed away. Leaving Gregg alone, and feeling completely and utterly helpless.
« Last Edit: February 14, 2019, 07:53:35 PM by Phoenix »
 
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Offline Saint

Re: ~Foundation: Introduction~
« Reply #22 on: February 14, 2019, 07:45:48 PM »
I've already pointed out the grammar to fix in person, so you can get that.  As for the scene, I'm always really impressed with your characterisation, and feel like there's a perfect mix of guilt and denial in this.
 
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Offline Phoenix

Re: ~Foundation: Introduction~
« Reply #23 on: February 14, 2019, 08:00:49 PM »
I've corrected a few of the errors, but I may have missed one or two-so if anyone else spots any just let me know.
Thanks though Saint,  :lovedance:. It was actually really hard to get this one flowing for a while, but I was planning out the events and that around how Andi found out about his parents for a while.

Needless to say, I'm glad that the denial and emotions came through. And, I'll reveal a little something. The reason Andi's acting out, is a build up for me introducing another of the other 'PC' characters.
If you have any guesses who, say below.~

Offline Phoenix

{Intro} :Chapter four: Battling authority.
« Reply #24 on: February 26, 2019, 09:23:23 PM »
   Gregg held his breath and closed his eyes. Out of all the scenarios he had played out in his mind, he had never expected Andi to react the way he had done. As he started doubting whether he made the right choice or not, he began to question just how long it would take for him to return.
   He was stubborn and defiant, but was also easily hurt emotionally. It was because of his nature, that predicting just how long it took for Andi to cool down varied depending on the reason.
   So many questions and fears were going through Gregg’s mind, all were left unanswered and left to fester as more piled on top.
  ‘Where are we supposed to live now?’
   ‘Who is going to take care of us?’
   ‘Are we going to be able to stay together?’
   ‘Will we have to move?’
   ‘Will we have to leave all our friends behind if we do?’

   In defeat, he opened his eyes once more and gazed down at his body, piecing together all the injuries that he never had before this had all happened. Both his arms were covered in light bandages, from cuts sustained on the impact and the fall when he had first managed to climb out of the car. Although small, they were scattered all over. They mostly gathered on his palms, and hid a multitude of different sized bruises-some of which hadn’t even begun to show.
   His fractured left leg was placed in a protective, but heavy cast, which was covered by a thin blanket. How long did the doctors say he had to wear it? Six weeks or so?
   Gregg frowned and ran his fingers through his hair, immediately feeling along to a small patch on his forehead as he did so. The medical tape holding the dressing tugged at his skin as he winced in pain touching it gently, which caused him to groan and sigh with defeat.
   “Oh,” Jennifer gasped aloud. “Oh my-is it true? It must be. You poor thing,” she thought aloud.
   Gregg avoided eye contact as he shuffled uncomfortably for a moment. Although he had spoken the words aloud, and been there, the whole event still didn’t seem real. How could both of them be gone?
   Unable to escape, he lay in silence with a loss for words. Everything had suddenly become so confusing, and there was no way that he could avoid it all.




The inspiration is flowing on this one at the moment, updates soon!  :read1:
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:Chapter four: Battling authority
« Reply #25 on: March 07, 2019, 11:27:17 AM »
   Gregg held his breath and closed his eyes. Out of all the scenarios he had played out in his mind, he had never expected Andi to react the way he had done. As he started doubting whether he made the right choice or not, he began to question just how long it would take for him to return.
   He was stubborn and defiant, but was also easily hurt emotionally. It was because of his nature, that predicting just how long it took for Andi to cool down varied depending on the reason.
   So many questions and fears were going through Gregg’s mind, all were left unanswered and left to fester as more piled on top.
   ‘Where are we supposed to live now?’
   ‘Who is going to take care of us?’
   ‘Are we going to be able to stay together?’
   ‘Will we have to move?’
   ‘Will we have to leave all our friends behind if we do?’

   In defeat, he opened his eyes once more and gazed down at his body, piecing together all the injuries that he never had before this had all happened. Both his arms were covered in light bandages, from cuts sustained on the impact and the fall when he had first managed to climb out of the car. Although small, they were scattered all over. They mostly gathered on his palms, and hid a multitude of different sized bruises-some of which hadn’t even begun to show.
   His fractured left leg was placed in a protective, but heavy cast, which was covered by a thin blanket. How long did the doctors say he had to wear it? Six weeks or so?
   Gregg frowned and ran his fingers through his hair, immediately feeling along to a small patch on his forehead as he did so. The medical tape holding the dressing tugged at his skin as he winced in pain touching it gently, which caused him to groan and sigh with defeat.
   “Oh,” Jennifer gasped aloud. “Oh my-is it true? It must be. You poor thing,” she thought aloud.
   Gregg avoided eye contact as he shuffled uncomfortably for a moment. Although he had spoken the words aloud, and been there, the whole event still didn’t seem real. How could both of them be gone?
   Unable to escape, he lay in silence with a loss for words. Everything had suddenly become so confusing, and there was no way that he could avoid it all.

{~}

   Panicked and confused, Andi rushed back down the hospital corridor, towards the exit. He had felt the urge-the need to run ever since they had arrived but now there was nothing stopping him from doing so.
   Tears briskly formed as he sped along, hearing annoyed groans as he roughly pushed past people walking the other way. It didn’t stop him though, in a way it made him more determined to be free.

   He reached the set of doors and turned around, several strangers were staring at him. Although they couldn’t place whether he was upset or simply acting out. Most diverted their gaze to pay attention to what they had been gazing at moments before, the rest changed to focus on Mike-who had been following Andi the moment he saw him pass the room they had been waiting in.
   Andi turned on his heels once more, and ran outside into the cool night air. As he did so, he waved his arm briefly, motioning to Mike that he wanted to be alone.

{~}

   He had watched Andi disappear from the family room the nurse had shown them too, and then his mother shortly after. Now Mike was left completely confused, and unsure where to go. Would the doctors let him see Gregg? He concluded that his mother was with him, or was at least looking.
   Then again, it was obvious from the way Andi was acting that he didn’t want to talk about what had happened. Let alone be surrounded by someone who wouldn’t know and be curious to find out.
   Sighing, he turned around and saw a nurse approaching him.
   “Are you okay?” Michelle asked. Mike, unsure of what to say, simply stood and shook his head. “You’re mum is with Gregg,” she confirmed. “Would you like me to take you too them?”
   “Yes please,” he replied rather quietly.
   She nodded in understanding, and motioned for him to follow. He did so somewhat slowly, and somehow unaware of his actions.

   They passed through the same hallways that they had done not so long ago, only this time the patients they passed along the way seemed sad or lost. The storm’s damage had caused many to retreat to safe retreats, or hide away-but it seemed everyone else hadn’t been as lucky.
   He held his breath as he moved, was Gregg really okay? What could have caused Andi to react the way he had done?
   “It’s okay,” he heard his mother saying.
   Michelle pulled the curtain away without a word, allowing Mike to see the scene in front of him. No one had told him what was going on, but as he moved forward to be beside Gregg’s bedside they didn’t need too. He immediately moved to the chair on the other side without a word and sat down. His mother was crying, and was almost clinging for dear life onto Gregg’s left arm.

{~}

   Now somehow aware of his surroundings, Gregg slowly and regretfully lifted his arm and started uncurling the necklaces he had been protecting. Mike and Jennifer looked on in shock, then sadness, as they both realised what it meant.
   He had secretly hoped that Andi would chose which one he wanted to keep, as it would have made his choice someone else’s decision rather than something he had to think about. Now, as he lay them on the blankets covering his bruised and battered body, he realised that he had to be the one to pick.
   His mother’s chain was an obvious choice for Andi to keep. They had both put money in to pay for it for her birthday, he had found it though. His keen eye as they browsed the shops with their father had been the one to spot it first, and had instantly fallen in love with the design.
   He had also been the one to hand it to her on her birthday all those years ago, and grinned when she had smiled for the first time that day warm in bed.
   “You help me to see the colour in the world.” She had remarked proudly as she slid it around her neck.
   All of the different gems shimmered in the morning sunlight, and reflected onto the walls surrounding them all.

   Gregg smiled sadly and picked the necklace up once more, and passed it to Mike.
   “Gregg-” he began.
   “Please, I need you to give it to Andi for me when you see him.”
   “He’ll come back, you’ll be able to give it to him then.”
   Shaking his head, Gregg took a deep breath and sighed.
   “No, he won’t come back here tonight.”
   “I should take you two back home,” Jennifer sighed slowly.
   “No,” Mike shook his head. “I’m staying here with Gregg.”
   “I’m not leaving you here alone.”
   “I won’t be alone mum,” he said defiantly. “I’ll be here with Gregg.”
   Gregg watched on unable to say anything more, and instead focused his attention on one of his closest friends sitting beside him as he slid his mothers necklace on to keep it safe. He then covered it with his clothes and glanced at the curtain at the end of the bed, before turning to his mother once more.
   “Mum, I am not leaving Gregg here alone.”
   Jennifer hung her head gently and nodded in understanding, she didn’t want to leave Gregg either. Andi was worrying her though, and she knew that she needed to find him.
   “I’ll get your dad to come and stay for a while when he gets home, will you two be okay? Do you need anything?”
   “No, we’re fine,” Mike replied. “I’ll call you if there are any problems, just go and find Andi. I saw him running outside, and I’m not sure where he went.”
   Jennifer then stood up and walked around to give Mike, then Gregg a brief hug before assuring them both that she would be back soon.
   “I’ll call your dad as soon as I get home and explain the best I can,” she said as she wiped away a few tears.
   “We’ll be fine mum,” Mike replied nodding. Sighing with defeat, she then slowly walked away leaving the two teenagers alone.
   “Please, find Andi,” Gregg thought as soon as she was out of sight.

{~}

   After a few moments of silence, Mike shifted where he was sitting so he was on the edge of Gregg’s bed. The question that was burning inside him needed to be answered, and he knew that Gregg was the only one who could answer it. The problem arose, where he wasn’t sure if he wanted to know the answer.
   All the clues were there, all he had to do was speak the words.
   He opened his mouth, expecting and hoping something to come out of them. For his voice to fill the silence with hope, instead of lingering on an uncomfortable void between the two of them. Though, after only a few seconds he realised he simply couldn’t do it.
   “You don’t have to say anything,” Gregg said quietly. He glanced up at his friend then, and tried to hide the slight confusion on his face. “I know what you’re wondering, one of the nurses told her and she came straight to see me. So I’m not surprised you’re confused,” Gregg feigned a smile and weaved his fingers together the best that he could.
   The bandages pulled gently against his muscles as he did so, causing him to remember all the damage that his body had endured.
   “Are they both-” Mike began. He then paused, as he realised he couldn’t complete the sentence. “I mean, they have to be okay, right?”
   Gregg shook his head slowly, avoiding eye contact as he did so.
   “No, they aren’t.” he said simply. Unable to say anything once more, Gregg sighed and brought his right hand just in front of his face to inspect it closer. Small traces of blood were starting to trickle through the bandages, and he began to wonder when they would be changed.
   “They can’t be both-” Mike trailed off as he sat completely stunned shaking his head slightly. “I mean, where are you going to live?”
   “America,” Gregg said aloud. “Maybe somewhere near New York? No, somewhere quieter-with snow and a lake I can walk beside in the mornings before school.”
   “Gregg-”
   “Yes?” Gregg stopped looking at his arm, and turned his attention purely at Mike. “Are you saying I can’t dream of living somewhere? I don’t know what is going to happen. All I know right now is that my body hurts all over, that my brother hates me and my parents are-” he then paused to closed his eyes and look away. “Nothing is going to bring them back Mike, nothing.”
   “I just can’t believe it,” Mike wondered aloud. “It just doesn’t seem real, that’s all.”
   “Believe it,” Gregg breathed in deeply once more. “Trust me, I saw it happen.”
   Mike, unsure of how to react, ran his hands through his hair and rested his head upon his palms. Closing his eyes, he sat there in disbelief and shock, unwilling to move away from his friend.

{~}

   Andi awoke the next morning restless and angry, in Mike’s bedroom that he had been trying to sleep in not so long ago. Only this time, he was alone. Jennifer had mentioned to him the night before that Mike had decided to stay with Gregg at the hospital. It was clear from her tone that she wanted a reason to stay with her son, but he shook his head and turned on the spot, and began to walk to the car.
   He didn’t want to believe that his brother would hide something so important from him, they had never hidden anything from each other before now. So why the change? Frustrated and hurt, he just couldn’t face being beside Gregg at the moment. To be constantly reminded of the horrific accident that had left their already small family to become practically obsolete.
   He groaned with pent up emotions, figuring out who in their small family network were left. Would one of them take them in?
   Adalyn, their older sister, would in a heartbeat. Her kind and protective nature had caused her to go down a career path that meant that she was away for long periods in many different countries as she helped animals all over the world.
   The problem about asking her, is that she was currently living in America, and wouldn’t be returning for at least two months or so. Even if she was able too, she would be dropping her whole career to take them both in.
   Sighing briefly, he thought to his aunt Marian’s family who were currently visiting her abroad. Their family home was quite far away for the moment. Like Adalyn, they too moved around due to their aunt’s work. Which made him begin to doubt if living with family was even going to be an option.
   Tears threatened to fall, clouding his eyesight in a blur which only made him even more tense and furious.

   There was one other possibility, and that was their other aunt’s family. Although Andi doubted if they would even be contacted. He hadn’t seen either Tabitha or George for over ten years, and other than a phone call and an occasional card they hadn’t had any other contact. They certainly weren’t close, then again with the situation Gregg and Andi were in, were there any other options?

-

   He dressed quickly and brushed his hair, parting it slightly to one side as he did so. Then slowly, he made his way down stairs and into the sitting room. Jennifer was sitting on the sofa with her partner Charlie. Her head resting upon her hands, as if in thought. Though Andi could tell that only moments before they had been talking. As soon as he sat down opposite them both, she looked up and smiled weakly.
   Charlie took a careful sip of tea, inhaling the steam as he did so. It was obvious to Andi, from his silence that he wanted to say something-he just wasn’t sure how to approach the subject.
   He placed the cup that he was holding onto, on an empty coaster beside him and gazed expectantly at Jennifer. His shy nature was holding him back from initiating the conversation, so he was grateful when she saw and nodded in understanding.
   “Do you want to head to the hospital this morning?” she asked calmly.
   “No,” Andi replied shaking his head.
   “How come? he’s your brother-” Charlie began.
   “-I know who he is. I just don’t want to see him right now,” he almost growled back with annoyance.
   “Well I’m leaving in half an hour-” He tried once more.
   “-And you’ll be leaving alone.” Andi snapped.
   Then, before either of them could say anything further, he stood up and stormed out of the room-leaving the two of them unsure of what to do next.

-

    The storm had damaged many homes and objects as it passed over the course of the night. Many families, such as Gregg and Andi’s had changed forever because of one thing that others hadn’t previously thought of as a threat before.
   The tree that caused the Julestone’s car to crash was still lying in the middle of the road-only it was being cut into smaller pieces whilst the weather showed signs of sunshine.
   Mitch stood outside and glanced across the road to the source of the noise and frowned. It could have easily been avoided.

   He looked away, back towards his open front door and pressed a button on his keys. The boot of the car beeped briefly and he walked forwards a few steps to release the catch properly. As he did so, he heard a car approaching and glanced up. The Fayre family were home safely, he noted relieved slightly.
   Emma had always been kind to both him and his partner Jean, she had even occasionally brought meals over if she knew either of them were ill. He was glad that they had returned okay, especially considering what could have happened.
   “Mum!” he heard Emma cry out.
   Mitch raised his head once more, only this time it was in confusion. He couldn’t see much from where he was standing, so he took a few steps towards the end of the drive way and peered over the short hedge.
   “What’s wrong?” he heard her mother ask.
   “That car-” she began. Emma then pointed across the road from them, indicating the abandoned crushed vehicle that the recovery service was beginning to attach to it’s rear.
   “Emma, do you know who the car belongs too?” he called out to her.
   “Mitch?” Mary asked as she walked down the street to greet him properly. Emma followed closely behind her, panic showing in her eyes.
   “Do you know what happened?” she asked him.
   “Yes, there was an accident last night,” he replied. “Do you know who owns the car?”
   “It belongs to my friend’s parents. I know the registration number because it used to be my dad’s.”
   “Was it?” Mary asked slowly. She then turned around to check the car and realised that Emma was correct.
   “Are they okay? Do you know who was in the car?” Emma asked in an urgent tone.
   Mitch looked to the cases that had been in the boot of the car, which he had saved and shook his head.
   “A boy, and his parents,” he replied slowly.
   “Was it Gregg or Andi?” Emma swallowed as nerves began to rise to the surface.
   “Gregg,” Mitch sighed sadly. “Apparently his dad lost control because of the rain,” he paused for a moment and leant against his car for support. “They hit that tree just down the road there,” he said as he indicated the tree that they had collided with.
   “Oh-” Mary gasped. “-Oh no,” she gasped.

   Emma and Mary looked to one another in shock, and then to the cases Mitch was standing near. Unwilling to open their mouths to speak, they stood in disbelief and waited in silence for a few moments.
   Emma ran her hands through her long light brown hair, which was tied back in a neat ponytail, nervously as she began to worry about her friend and his family. Her eyes glazed over with tears, although she refused to let them fall until she found out further news.
   Taking a deep breath, Mary then turned on the spot and stared at the recovery truck which was now driving away.
   “Gregg is at the hospital,” Mitch offered.
   “So he’s okay?” Emma asked, her eyes brimming with hope.
   “I think he has a fractured leg and some minor injuries, but he was okay when he went into the ambulance.”
   “And Leia and Justin?” Mary asked, doubting her words as she spoke.
   “They didn’t make it,” Mitch replied sadly.
   “Both?-” Emma cried. “No-”
   “I was just about to head to the hospital to drop the cases that were in their car with them, do you think you would be okay to look after them instead? As you know the family and all, I would still like to make sure he’s alright-”
   “-That’s fine, yes.” Mary replied nodding quickly. “We’ll take them now, and head over to the hospital as soon as we have them all.”
   Mary then stepped around the outside of Mitch’s car and took a small bag and suitcase, and indicated for Emma to do the same as she passed her.
   Within only a few minutes, they had all been placed safely in Mary’s garage which was then locked for safety.
   Impatiently worried, Emma waited for her mother to hurry up locking up. Her legs had begun to feel unstable, and so she clambered back into her mother’s car once more.

   Mitch reappeared shortly after, and sat in the back behind Emma hoping that Gregg and his brother were okay after the tragedy.
   “I hope you don’t mind me tagging along,” Mitch asked as Mary opened the driver’s side door.
   “No, it’s completely fine,” She assured him. “I understand why you would be worried about him considering.”
   Emma was confused, although she never asked for the answer to the question that she was now wondering. Why would Mitch worry about Gregg? Had something happened to someone in his family in the past?

   They drove in silence and tried to focus on the road ahead of them, not the remnants and aftermath of the event which had taken at least two lives.

-

   Emma clambered out of the car quickly, feeling the wind lift her hair as she did so. Her mother and Mitch exited shortly after, and stared for a moment at the building in front of them all. The last time Emma had had to visit the hospital was over ten years ago when her she had managed to have a really bad fall at school. It seemed so surreal to be standing in front of it once more.
   “Mary? Emma is that you?” Charlie called out.
   Emma turned around, and saw him approaching with a small bag. She noted that he looked dishevelled as he rushed over to greet them, and frowned sadly.
   “Are you okay? How is Jennifer and Mike?” Mary asked alarmed.
   “We’re fine, I’m here for Gregg right now,” Charlie replied.
   “Do you know how he’s doing?” Emma asked quietly. He turned to her in reply and shook his head.
   “No,” he said pausing. “The three of them were here last night but apparently Andi didn’t want to stay. She drove him home last night.”
   “So Gregg was alone?”
   “No, Mike stayed. He actually refused to leave him on his own, I meant to drive down last night to stay with them both but I only arrived home a few hours ago myself.”
   Emma, slightly relieved, took a deep breath and tried to relax as they gradually made their way through the car park.

-

   Charlie walked slightly faster, and ahead of the others,  as he approached the reception. It only took a few moments for a nurse to come to his aid, and he was thankful that they understood the situation. He took a deep breath as Mary and Mitch caught up, and tried to give Emma a reassuring smile. The sadness over losing two friends, along with worry for what would happen to their children though, was so blindingly obvious she found it hard not to speak out.
   “This way,” the nurse said kindly, as he begun to lead the way.
   Henry was rather young in age, even though he was far more wise than he let on. He had only just started his shift not long before, but had been assigned to watch over Gregg wherever possible.
   As soon as he had been told about his situation, he had kept a close eye over him, and his friend. The paramedic, Sarah, who had brought him in had stayed close by until he had arrived. At which point, she had a hard time convincing herself to go home.
   He had understood immediately how devastating the storm had been, and had expected a lot of casualties as a result. Though he had never expected to feel utterly powerless to help even with all the training he had gone through.
   Taking a deep breath, he meandered through all the patients and staff, stopping at a slightly more private room that he had been placed in not long before he had arrived.

   As they all stopped, they could hear voices behind the closed door that separated them from the two teenagers. Henry and Emma frowned, Gregg was angry and upset.
   “You can’t tell him to leave!” he growled as she entered the room.
   “I need to speak to you alone,” the stranger said as she stood at the end of his bed.
   She was tall, and overbearing in nature. Even though she was talking directly to Gregg, Emma had the immediate impression that she was the type to push her luck with her bosses and push her opinions where they were unwelcomely received.
   Gregg sat upright, immediately regretting the decision as the wires attached to his arms tugged slightly on his skin.
   “You have no right,” he cried out.
   “Whoa,” Henry said as he gently ushered Emma to move out of the way. She did so quickly, allowing him to walk forwards and coax Gregg to relax a little. “What is going on here?” he asked.
   After a small pause, the stranger placed her small briefcase at the end of the bed and looked disapprovingly at the male nurse that was threatening to disrupt her time.
   “I’m Raye, Gregg’s social worker. I need to speak to him alone about his case.” She then turned to the door, and copied the expression to the people who were now inside the room. “Are any of you related to Gregg?” she asked bluntly.
   “No,” Charlie replied. “But that shouldn’t matter should it? Gregg has just lost both of his parents. If you only expect family to surround him right now he’ll be left pretty much alone for the whole time of his stay here.”
   “He has Andi does he not?” Raye replied in retort. Emma shook her head in disbelief and frowned as she walked forwards. Mike was sitting to one side of Gregg staring at the conflict in front of him with wide eyes.
   As soon as she realised how unsure he was, she smiled reassuringly at him and stepped around Henry to give Gregg a hug.
   Raye rolled her eyes in frustration and ran her hands over her face and through her long dark hair. Realising as she did so that this was one battle she doubted if she would win.

   Sure enough, after checking Gregg over briefly Henry ushered her out of the room to try and reason with her. She waved her arms in defeat, and picked her briefcase back up once more with a determined expression that she held until she left the hospital completely.

Offline Phoenix

{INTRO} :Chapter five: An uncertain future.
« Reply #26 on: March 08, 2019, 09:40:17 AM »
   Emma took a deep breath and sighed as she stood staring at the sympathy cards for sale in front of her. No one close to her had passed away before, and so she wasn’t sure which one to get. A simple design? One with a poem? One with or without glitter? Flowers? Maybe she should just settle for a ‘thinking of you’ one. She sighed, realising she would likely encounter the same issue picking that card out too.
   Brendan was meant to be meeting her in the town, so far though, he was running a little late. She hoped that he would be able to help her chose when he arrived, whenever that was.

   In defeat, she decided to wait for him outside the shop. It was a surprisingly nice day, considering only a few days before the storm had destroyed a lot of the town centre. The sunshine was warm as she stepped outside once more, with a cool breeze which made her smile briefly.
   It lifted her side fringe slightly as she walked over to the benches in the middle of the highstreet, which she peacefully sat down upon.
   After a few moments, she pulled her legs in towards her chest and wrapped her arms around so they touched her bare skin. Shorts had been an obvious choice to wear despite the weather, it had been chilly as she had set out just over an hour before hand but it was warming up nicely as the day wore on.
   As she thought about Brendan, she traced the faint intricate designs of the fabric she was wearing that faded just above her knee. Just how long was he going to be?
   She looked up and down the highstreet and rolled her eyes with slight annoyance. He was never usually late meeting up, then again quite a few things had changed since the storm had hit. This could be one of them, although she hoped it wasn’t.

   Emma then glanced down at her arms, and moved the blue cardigan that was covering her wrists to check the time. It was getting close to lunch, where all the shops would become surprisingly busy for two hours, and she was hoping to visit Gregg one last time before he was discharged.
   Up until now she had avoided calling him to find out where he was, he had let her know not long before hand that he was on his way. She just never found out how far that was before the signal cut out. He could turn up any minute, so was it worth turning her music player on to ease the boredom?
   She signed once more, and began to reach through her shoulder bag that was resting against her legs. There was a notepad and small number of pens for when she had the urge to randomly draw things, along with her purse and a small drink. She pulled out the water bottle slowly, even though she wasn’t actually thirsty. It was to give her something to do as she waited, however long it would be.




You know the drill by now  :thanks:. More soon. :ninja:





Okay, so I wasn't expecting this so soon, but ...NEXT CHAPTER!!!  :lovedance:
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:Chapter five: An uncertain future.
« Reply #27 on: March 08, 2019, 04:50:35 PM »
   Emma took a deep breath and sighed as she stood staring at the sympathy cards for sale in front of her. No one close to her had passed away before, and so she wasn’t sure which one to get. A simple design? One with a poem? One with or without glitter? Flowers? Maybe she should just settle for a ‘thinking of you’ one. She sighed, realising she would likely encounter the same issue picking that card out too.
   Brendan was meant to be meeting her in the town, so far though, he was running a little late. She hoped that he would be able to help her chose when he arrived, whenever that was.

   In defeat, she decided to wait for him outside the shop. It was a surprisingly nice day, considering only a few days before the storm had destroyed a lot of the town centre. The sunshine was warm as she stepped outside once more, with a cool breeze which made her smile briefly.
   It lifted her side fringe slightly as she walked over to the benches in the middle of the high-street, which she peacefully sat down upon.
   After a few moments, she pulled her legs in towards her chest and wrapped her arms around so they touched her bare skin. Shorts had been an obvious choice to wear despite the weather, it had been chilly as she had set out just over an hour before hand but it was warming up nicely as the day wore on.
   As she thought about Brendan, she traced the faint intricate designs of the fabric she was wearing that faded just above her knee. Just how long was he going to be?
   She looked up and down the high-street and rolled her eyes with slight annoyance. He was never usually late meeting up, then again quite a few things had changed since the storm had hit. This could be one of them, although she hoped it wasn’t.

   Emma then glanced down at her arms, and moved the blue cardigan that was covering her wrists to check the time. It was getting close to lunch, where all the shops would become surprisingly busy for two hours, and she was hoping to visit Gregg one last time before he was discharged.
   Up until now she had avoided calling him to find out where he was, he had let her know not long before hand that he was on his way. She just never found out how far that was before the signal cut out. He could turn up any minute, so was it worth turning her music player on to ease the boredom?
   She signed once more, and began to reach through her shoulder bag that was resting against her legs. There was a notepad and small number of pens for when she had the urge to randomly draw things, along with her purse and a small drink. She pulled out the water bottle slowly, even though she wasn’t actually thirsty. It was to give her something to do as she waited, however long it would be.

{~}

   Even though he was close, Brendan was aware of how late he was running. Constant, small problems had made his morning turn into a stressful blur. Connor hadn’t helped the situation either, adding his own issues on top of his. And, although he was happy to help his twin, by the end he was starting to feel like it was a one sided effort.
   He rushed down the street towards Emma, there were now only two roads separating himself from the town centre and he was determined to make the waiting up to her. As he sped up, the breeze lifted his hair away from his face, revealing his cool blue eyes as it did so. It was the only difference  that he and his brother shared, as he had soft brown.
   As he waited for the traffic light to turn green so that he could cross, he took his phone out of his pocket to check the time-and how late he was running and covered his face with his hands in disbelief. He was supposed to be with Emma almost an hour ago, how had time passed so quickly?
   The siren blared next to him, indicating that it was safe to walk across- and he did so running. He hadn’t meant to keep her waiting, and only hoped that she was still around.

   He made his way down the high-street, hopeful that Emma was still where she said she had been when he had phoned her. It hadn’t been that long ago, but he wouldn’t blame her if she had moved onto somewhere else.
   The middle of the town was split like a cross junction, with shops placed on each branch. Brendan made his way down one of them, looking everywhere he could to see if he could see her as he did so. Though as he turned to walk down another, he stopped and changed directions.
   Walking, not too far away from him as he left a newsagents, was Andi.
   Without thinking, he slid his phone back out and immediately redialled Emma’s number. She answered straight away, clearly expecting a call.
   “Are you close?” she asked hopefully.
   “I am, I’m in town now actually. Can you come back up too Robertson’s?”
   “I can,” she said pausing. “But why? Are you hungry or something?”
   “Yes, but that’s not why,” he said smiling slightly. “Andi’s here,” he explained.
   “I’ll be right there,” Emma assured him. After hearing the dial tone, he hung up and made his way over to Andi who was now starting to walk further away from him.

   Within a few moments, he had caught up with his friend, and had placed a hand on his shoulder.
   Andi spun around straight away, relaxing slightly when he saw Brendan in front of him.
   “Are you okay?”
   “Everyone keeps asking me that,” Andi replied slowly, but with an annoyed undertone.
   “We’re all just worried about you that’s all,” Brendan offered.
   “I know, and it’s nice and all-but still,” he paused to see Emma walking towards them both.
   “Do you know how Gregg is doing?” she asked as she neared.
   “No, I don’t,” Andi replied.
   “Oh? How come?” Brendan asked.
   “Because I haven’t seen him, and I don’t want too.”
   “Andi!” Emma gasped. “Why? He’s your brother-”
   “-I know he’s my brother. I never said he wasn’t-” Andi rolled his eyes and looked away.

   Brendan and Emma glanced to one another, unsure of what to say next. Did Andi really not care about Gregg any more?
   “I guess what Emma is trying to say, is that she’s just surprised you haven’t been to see him considering,” Brendan said quietly.
   “Considering what? That he kept something from me?”
   “I don’t think that’s what happened Andi, I really don’t.”
   “And what would you know hmm?” Andi asked as he questioned her.
   “I know you,” Emma said flatly. “And I know him. I know you two more than you know, so stop making me feel like I don’t. We’ve been friends since we were five years old Andi, you don’t get to push me around and talk to me the way you are because you have managed to read a situation wrong.”
   “Emma-” he began.
   “-No.” She said as she interrupted. “Just don’t. You don’t get to backtrack on this conversation, but you do need to explain. Gregg is your family, and after what happened you need to be with him. So why aren’t you?”
   “If he’s family, then why try and hide the fact that our parents died?”
   Emma took a step back for a moment to collect her thoughts before she spoke. When she did though, it was in a tone that she had used only once before hand. Her voice became solemn and quiet as the sadness in her heart overwhelmed her body.
   “He wasn’t trying to hide it, he was trying to protect you.”
   “How could he protect me from it? I was going to find out eventually.”
   “I know that, everyone knows that. But you aren’t listening to me, like you weren’t listening to Gregg the last time you were together that night.”
   “What do you mean?” Brendan asked curiously.
   “I mean,” Emma sighed and took a deep breath. “I know that whoever told you would not be able to change the situation, that it wouldn’t make it any less devastating or life changing.”
   “Right,” Andi agreed. “It wouldn’t have, no.”
   “Andi, are you really saying that you would have preferred to hear the news from a complete stranger? From someone that neither you or Gregg knew? From someone that didn’t love you?” Emma took a deep breath as she wiped tears away from her eyes. And hoped, as she did so that Andi was actually listening too her. “Gregg was protecting you, he cared enough to tell you the hardest news that anyone should ever hear, even after watching it all happen in front of him. So tell me, why aren’t you with him right now? Because if it was my sister, I wouldn’t have left her side.”
   “I-I don’t know,” Andi replied quietly after a few moments of silence.
   “Well it’s about time you did, he’s been on his own pretty much since that night. And that isn’t fair,” She concluded.
   “No, it isn’t,” Brendan agreed. “We were going to head over today if you want to tag along with us though?” he offered.
   Andi nodded in reply as he didn’t trust himself to speak any further. Emma was right, and he had made a foolish mistake thinking that Gregg had tried to deliberately hurt him.

-

   They arrived at the hospital, after having lunch, and walked up to the reception in silence. Emma smiled at Hannah as they approached, a gesture which she returned straight away.
   “You’re becoming a regular here,” the nurse chuckled quietly.
   “I guess I am,” Emma replied sadly. “It’s a shame under the circumstances really. Is Gregg still in the same room?”
   “He is indeed, are you okay making your way there?”
   “We are,” She assured Hannah. “Thank you though,” she continued as she turned away to wave.
   After a brief pause, Andi took a deep breath and linked his left arm through Emma’s right.
   “I’m sorry for being an idiot,” he said apologetically. “I should have known what Gregg was trying to do.”
   Emma stopped walking straight away and looked beside her, Andi was looking directly at her with a glisten in both of his eyes. She smiled and bit her lip as it started to quiver with sadness once more. Fighting the urge to cry, she wrapped her arms around his shoulders, reassuring him as she did so that it was okay.

{~}

   Gregg rolled his eyes, feeling yet another wave of frustration flow throughout his body as he repeated himself for what seemed like the countless time.
   “I am not talking about my future without Andi here,” he said to Raye.
   “I have been trying to talk to him, but every time I have gone to Mike’s house to see him, he’s been out.”
   “I really don’t know what you expect me to do about that,” he laughed. “I’m not allowed to leave until tomorrow at the earliest, what makes you think I can bring him here when I can barely stand right now?”
   “Gregg-”
   “-I’m sorry, but I just don’t get why you’re telling me this. I haven’t seen him since Monday, and it’s now Thursday. I’m not a wizard, I can’t just wave a magic wand or summon him here. It’s like you think I enjoy going through this same conversation every day or something.”
   Gregg shook his head in disbelief and ran his hands over some of the cuts covering his arms. The bandages had been removed for the last time only that morning, and he now only had dressings to cover where the larger wounds were.
   “I need to tell you where you’ll be staying when you leave though Gregg, you know that-”
   “-Seriously?” Gregg growled. “I know you need to do your job Raye, I’m not doubting that for a second but this is silly. I’m really not comfortable talking about this without my brother here, so please just-” he sighed with annoyance once more and shook his head.
   Just then though the door opened slowly, which he then focused his attention on. Brendan walked through first, then Emma. They both glanced between Raye and Gregg, wondering if they should leave so they could talk in private for a moment.
   Gregg, grateful for the distraction, waved them both over to sit down. They did so smiling, although Emma gave him a hug before she settled in one of the uncomfortable chairs.
   After a few seconds of awkwardness, she then turned to her left to see the light streaming through the gap that they had just walked through.
   “Is something wrong?” Gregg asked. Shaking her head, she stood up and readied herself to see where Andi had gone.
   “No, she was just wondering what was taking me so long,” Andi replied nervously as he stepped inside.
   “I’m sorry, and you are?” Raye asked. Gregg stared at him, wondering as he did so what he would say next, and if he would apologise for not visiting.
   “I’m Andi, Gregg’s brother,” he replied.
   “Right, finally,” she sighed with relief. “I need to speak to you both, is that okay now or-?”
   “Now that Andi’s here, yes.” Gregg looked away. Unable to hide the hurt any longer, he forced himself to focus on something else.
   Andi sat at the end of the bed, unsure of what to expect or say any further. He had never upset his brother this badly before, so he wasn’t sure how to put things right between them.

   Raye reached down beside the chair that she was sitting on, and pulled out a folder with many pieces of paper in. As she sat upright once more, she placed them on top of the hospital bed in front of her so she could spread them out a little.
   “Andi, I’m Raye-your social worker,” she said as she introduced herself.
   “I kind of figured, Jennifer kept saying there was a social worker coming around to visit me,” Andi replied. She waved his comment along, giving the impression to them all that she just wanted to get to the main conversation, and reason for her visit.
   “Do you know where Adalyn is right now? I’m talking about your sister here,”
   “I figured that much,” Gregg sighed. “She’s living in America until the end of October.”
   “I thought it was until January,” Andi thought aloud.
   “And you have two aunt’s yes?”
   “Marian and Tabitha,” Gregg confirmed.
   “Our Aunt Marian is visiting Adalyn right now though,” Andi said as he turned to face Raye directly.
   “That will be why I’ve been having trouble contacting them, is her partner with her?”
   “And our cousin, yes.” Gregg answered.
   “Okay,” Raye thought aloud. “Do you have a contact number for Adalyn? Maybe we can try and phone her?”
   “I doubt it,” Gregg sighed. “She was having issues with the phone company before the storm hit, mum was trying to phone her the night before we left.”
   “And your aunt Tabitha?”
   “I don’t know, we haven’t seen her since we started secondary school. My dad didn’t really get along with her, I think they had an argument the last time they spoke,” Andi replied.
   “Okay,” Raye said quietly. She then took out a pen and started to make notes on a sheet of paper.
   A few minutes of silence later, Raye then packed all the paperwork together once more and stood up.
   “I’ll come back a little later when I have a little news, hopefully I’ll be able to track someone down for you both,” she said in a firm, but almost happy tone.

   Raye left the four of them alone moments later, leaving the atmosphere thick with tension as she did so.
   Knowing that Gregg and Andi needed to talk things over, Brendan stood up, and reached out for Emma’s hand.
   “We’ll be back in a minute,” he said as she shot him a confused expression. Gregg sighed sadly and nodded in understanding towards them, leaving them to walk out without another word.
   For the first time since the accident, Andi and Gregg were alone. The difference this time around, was that night, Gregg had wanted-and needed him to be there. Now, almost three days had passed. Most of which, he had been by himself.
   Andi turned to face his brother once more, to find him struggling to reach for a glass of water on the side. He immediately stood up, but Gregg shook his head and waved him away.
   “Don’t,” he growled.
   “I was just trying to help,” Andi sad sadly.
   “Why? You haven’t been here to help me before, why start-”
   “-I made a mistake,” Andi said as he bit the inside of his mouth gently.
   Gregg turned away, hiding his face completely as tears of anger and confusion started to flow down his cheeks once more.
   “Yes, and so did I. I should have just let someone else tell you-” he began.
   “-No, Gregg-No. I was wrong, I’m sorry. I should never have left the way I did, I should have stayed with you.”
   “Well you did didn’t you,” he spat. Gregg then turned to face Andi, his face contorted with so many emotions that he had been trying to shield and deal with on his own. “You walked away, you didn’t care. Why is it a surprise that I now don’t?”
   “Gregg, I’m sorry-” Andi said quietly.
   Gregg sat bolt upright, pulling out the cables and tubes that were attached to his arms as he did so.
   “Sorry?” he shouted. He swung his legs over the bed and tried to stand, only to find that his fractured leg was too weak and unstable to support his body weight without support. “Sorry?” he cried. “You left me here alone!”
   Gregg leant on the bed as he took the few steps separating them both and pushed Andi as hard as he could out of the way. Which wasn’t very much, as pain was starting to spread throughout his body once more.

   Andi stood up and backed away a few steps as he watched Gregg collapse in an exhausted lump on the floor. Just as he was about to move closer and help him up, Gregg shook his head violently and looked away once more.
   “Go,” he said quietly, “just go.”
   “I’m not leaving you alone-” Andi began.
   “-Go!” Gregg shouted. “I don’t want you here! Just go away!”
   “Whoa, what’s going on here?” Michelle asked as she rushed in. “Gregg, you still need to be in bed sweetie.” She made her way calmly to him, and gave Andi a reassuring smile as she passed.
   “I’m fine,” Gregg growled with defiance.
   “Oh, I know you are,” she said as she helped him lie back on the bed once more. “You’ve been a really good patient up until now, what happened?”
   “I have an unwanted visitor,” he replied.
   Andi hung his head and found himself walking towards the door in silence. Michelle, upon seeing him edging away, quickly walked over to him and placed her hand on his shoulder.
   “Just let him calm down for a moment, don’t leave. He really does need you,” she said only loud enough for him to hear. He slowly nodded his head, understanding but not quite believing her words, he left unsure of what to do next.
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Offline Saint

Re: ~Foundation: Introduction~
« Reply #28 on: March 09, 2019, 11:52:46 AM »
Drama's getting good now. :pointandlaugh:

Only thing I spotted grammar wise was chose that should be choose in the first paragraph. As for constructive feedback, I'd maybe e, plain who Raye is a little earlier. At first I was wondering why he'd be calling a doctor by their first name until you revealed it was the social worker. Just threw me a little.

Other than that, good installment, wonder who's coming next?

Offline Phoenix

Re: ~Foundation: Introduction~
« Reply #29 on: March 09, 2019, 02:58:37 PM »
Raye is a gal Saint.  :shrug:
Maybe I should have made that clearer?.. I'll read through later.

Although I'm not sure how I can introduce her earlier to be honest, do you have any thoughts maybe?

As for the next person, it's someone you wouldn't really expect.  :teabreak:



-edit. Maybe it would help if you didn't miss a chapter  :pokestick:.
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Offline Saint

Re: ~Foundation: Introduction~
« Reply #30 on: March 09, 2019, 07:21:08 PM »
Okay just went back and read the chapter I missed, 5 makes much more sense now.  I pointed out the grammar errors in person so wont repeat them here, but all in all keep it up.

Offline Phoenix

Re: ~Foundation: Introduction~
« Reply #31 on: March 10, 2019, 12:23:51 PM »
Well, I'm glad I'm not confusing people now, although you really should have looked at the number of the chapter you were reading beforehand.  :pointandlaugh:

I did correct the errors you pointed at, but only in my physical (not online file) so they aren't on here yet. If someone else spots them (as I can't remember what they are), I'll change them then.

Otherwise, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

I'd post an update for chapter six, but the intro for that section's quite long and I don't want to spam with replies if people haven't had a chance to catch up yet.
It should be finished relatively soon though! :lovedance:

Offline Phoenix

:Chapter six: A temporary beginning.
« Reply #32 on: March 11, 2019, 12:21:51 PM »
   Andi stood outside the room as he battled with the decision of whether to leave or stay. Every ache in his body was screaming at him to go back inside the room a little later, to let Gregg calm down before he tried to speak to him once more. But there was also a small part of him that wanted to just go back to Mike’s house and avoid the situation and confrontation entirely.
   He swallowed as he tried to bury the emotions that were threatening to surface, and searched up and down the corridor. Emma and Brendan were no where in sight, and he slid his hands into his pockets-to give himself something to do, not because they were cold.
   The door creaked quietly open beside him, and he felt Michelle place her hand gently on his shoulder.
   “Can you spare a few minutes to talk?” she asked him calmly. Andi nodded in reply, and followed her down the hallway to the waiting room.

   Once inside, she motioned for him to sit on one of the comfortable large sofas to one side, as she herself opposite him.
   “Gregg was just surprised to see you,” she said quietly. “I really wouldn’t take it personally, he’s had a rough time here.”
   “I tried saying sorry, I really didn’t think about why he wanted to tell me about our parents until today.”
   “You being here with him would have helped, but he’s been having issues I doubt you would have been able to do much about,” she said as she leant forward. “I think what happened has hit him personally,”
   “Like, physically?” Andi asked. Michelle shook her head, and frowned slightly as she thought.
   “No, I think he’s finding it hard to deal with it all, it’s-” she said pausing for a moment. “It’s almost as if he’s blaming himself right now.”
   “But why? It wasn’t his fault.”
   “I wish I knew Andi, I really do. Listen, we’ve been trying to get ahold of your sister. I know Raye has been asking for contact details but as the number we have isn’t working, I was wondering if it was the right one?”
   “It is, she just hasn’t had much luck with her phone right now,” he explained.
   “Is there any other way you can think of we can try and let her know what’s going on?”
   “Not really,” Andi replied honestly.
   “Okay, well you’ll let us know if you think of anything won’t you?”
   “Of course,” he nodded.
   Michelle then stood up to leave, seemingly satisfied with his answers. As soon as she was about to leave though, Andi stood up suddenly, causing her to turn back around to face him.

   A few moments passed in silence, where Andi tried to gather the nerve to ask what he was thinking. After that, he took a step towards her and rested his hand on his mothers necklace underneath his t-shirt.
   “Is he okay?”
   “In what way?” Michelle asked.
   “I saw the cast on his leg, and his arms,” he thought aloud.
   “The bandages came off on his arms only this morning, most of the cuts are healing but the bruises are still going to bother him for a little while.”
   “Is he hurt anywhere else?”
   “There are some nasty bruises on his ribcage and stomach, some of them were making it painful for him to breathe initially but they’ve started to clear up now. There is also a nasty gash on his forehead, you probably saw the dressing there.”
   “I did,” Andi confirmed. “Is he okay other than that though? I mean, did he have to have any operations?”
   “No, he was fairly lucky considering. His leg will take the longest to heal, he’ll need to come back in around five weeks to remove the cast so he’ll be on crutches until then.”
   “Okay,” he said as he tried to calm down. He had wanted to ask Gregg personally how he was doing, but it didn’t seem likely that he would want to talk about his situation with him right now.
   “If he doesn’t stress himself out too much, or injure himself further, he should be able to leave tomorrow. Do you have anywhere you can stay?”
   “I’ve been staying with Mike’s parents since the accident, my parents wrote in their will that if we couldn’t stay with family then we were to stay with them. I didn’t know where else to go, so I just stayed with them.”
   “Well I’m sure Raye will figure something out soon,” said reassuringly. “She may not seem like the nicest person right now but she really does try to do the right thing.”
   “We’ll see I guess,” Andi sighed.
   “I need to head back, will you be okay here on your own? The canteen isn’t too far away if you’re hungry.”
   “I’ll be okay,” he assured her. “What makes you so sure I’ll stay though?”
   Michelle smiled and laughed gently.
   “I don’t know, but I’m hoping you will.” She replied, leaving the room shortly after.

-

   Andi stood outside the door that Gregg was behind, battling with himself as he questioned his next move. Emma and Brendan had gone home hours beforehand, and he was completely on his own just as he had been earlier on in the day.
   The evening had rolled around slowly, with the night sky gradually creeping in. Still, he had waited, wavering on the verge of wanting to avoid the potential argument that would happen, and needing to be by his brothers side.
   Nervously, he clutched onto the toy that he had purchased in the hospital gift shop, and squeezed it gently. The little raccoon didn’t protest, and went back to it’s original shape moments later.
   He sighed and reached for the door handle, holding onto it tightly as panic spread throughout. As he paused, he noticed that the lights inside the room were turned off. Maybe Gregg was sleeping?

   Michelle approached him slowly, carrying a thin blanket and a pillow in her arms. As her shift had ended, she had changed into a pair of shorts and a t-shirt, which was why Andi didn’t agknowledge her as she stood beside him straight away.
   “I checked on him a little while ago, he was resting then,” she said calmly. He glanced beside him, smiling awkwardly as he relaxed a little.
   “I never left you know,” he said as he turned away once more. “I couldn’t.”
   “I hoped you wouldn’t,” Michelle admitted. “He really hasn’t been doing well here on his own.”
   “I tried apologising, but he wouldn’t listen.”
   “A brother’s bond is stronger than you realise, he may be hurt but he’ll never leave your side. You two are a team,”
   “My mum said that once,” Andi said sadly.
   “And she was right, are you going inside?” she asked. He nodded slowly as he took a deep breath,  leaving Michelle to smile and pass the bedding over to him. “If you need anything, you can ask for Hannah or Henry, they’ve been looking after Gregg and are doing a late shift tonight.”
   Andi nodded and slid both the pillow and blanket under his arm. Just as Michelle was about to turn away though, she stopped and spoke once more.
   “Andi,” she began. He turned to face her once more, as he felt the need to listen intently to what she was about to say. “You and Gregg need to be in this together from now on. The next stage of your lives without your parents is going to be tough. So you need to be in this together from the beginning, you need to listen to each other and trust each other completely. Everything around you will be changing yes, so you two need to be facing it on as one. This is going to be hard enough on you both on your own, so don’t make it harder than it has to be.”
   Michelle concluded with a stern expression, which made Andi frown as he realised she was right.

   He turned the door handle slowly, and as quietly as he could, as he tried to make sure he wasn’t disturbing his brother at all. As he crept in, he could see a faint glow that was streaming through the window, which illuminated the room in a muted glow.
   Andi closed the door behind him, and made his way over to the chairs and sat down staring at Gregg as he slept. He was frowning, and shuffling around occasionally, grimmacing with his eyes closed. As he was unsure if he should wake him, he glanced down at the racoon teddy that he had picked up and placed the bedding on the floor.
   He took a deep breath, and stepped forward a few steps to be beside Gregg’s bedside and placed the soft toy under his arm.
   Gregg awoke straight away, but opened his eyes gradually. Upon seeing Andi’s face, he winced and shifted so he was lying on his side facing him.
   “Sorry, I didn’t mean to wake you,” Andi said quietly.
   “I didn’t think you’d come back,” Gregg shrugged, looking at the gift his brother had brought him.
   Andi frowned, had Gregg hoped that he had left him after all?
   “I never actually left the hospital,” he replied. “I left the room because you wanted me out, but I stayed here.”
   “Oh,” Gregg glanced at Andi and the chairs behind him and back to the racoon. “Are you staying here?” he asked.
   “I was hoping too,” Andi replied awkwardly. “I can go if you really want me too though.”
   Gregg shook his head slightly, but it was enough for Andi to relax enough to wrap his arms around and give his brother a hug.
   “I thought you’d left me again,” Gregg whispered to him. “I don’t like being alone.”
   “I only left because you told me too, I wanted to stay. I’m sorry,” Andi apologised once more as he pulled away.
   “I’m sorry too,” Gregg admitted. “I was just upset earlier-”
   “-I get it, you don’t have to explain.”
   “The raccoon’s pretty cool, thank you.”
   Andi grinned and pulled up one of the chairs as Gregg looked on.
   “You can buy little accessories for him in the shop, bandages and first aid stuff. I was tempted to get a leg cast for the little guy,” he joked. Gregg shook his head and chuckled, picking up the raccoon’s little legs as he did so.
   “It’s not a good look, I’m not sure he’d suit it to be honest,” Gregg said grudgingly. “He’d have to have the crutches to go along too to help him walk.”
   “I thought raccoons walked on all fours?” Andi thought aloud. Gregg nodded in reply and pointed to the window.
   “This guy’s different,” he said smiling slightly. “There’s a pull out sofa bed over there if you want to sleep, it’ll be more comfortable than those chairs.”
   Andi nodded and immediately stood up to get ready to sleep, he did so without another word, as when he turned back to pick up the blanket he saw that Gregg was asleep once more.

{~}

   Jewel awoke the next morning, restless but also excited. Her bed had already been taken to her new home, along with most of their furniture, and so she was reduced to sleeping on a pile of pillows from their sofa in what used to be her room.
   It was a long drive to the new building, so an early start was in order. Usually having to wake up didn’t bother her all too much, but today was different. She hadn’t slept well, as she had worried that there wouldn’t be enough time to pack the last of her things before they had to set off.
   Sighing, she gathered what she could carry and carefully placed them in the last box that her mother, Ava, had given her the night before. There wasn’t much to put inside after the cushions were out of the way, and her wash bag was packed, still she worried.
   She combed her long blonde hair, tying it up and placing it into a messy bun that rested just above her neck, and tried to ready herself for the move.
   It would take them several hours to drive at least, music and pit stops along the way were going to be important to avoid getting bored.

{~}

   Gregg stepped outside the hospital, with Andi, and gazed at the sky. Even with the crutches he was finding it hard to balance, although that wasn’t the thing that was going through his mind as he stood waiting for Jennifer to catch up with them.
   It was because he couldn’t believe that the weather had turned so drastically the night that he had arrived. Now as he stood outside, he almost couldn’t believe that it had been so damaging to everything that it touched.
   “Are you okay?” Andi asked as he knelt down to tie his shoe lace.
   “I’m fine,” Gregg lied as he struggled to piece together the last few days inside his mind.
   Jennifer tapped him gently on the shoulder, and he spun around to see her carrying a bag.
   “You left some things behind,” she smiled as she indicated what she was holding.
   “I’ll take them,” Andi offered. Jennifer handed it to him, and he peered inside for a moment before taking out a seeled envelope.
   “Can you open it for me?” Gregg asked him. Andi nodded, and peeled away the backing so that Gregg could see what was inside.
   Andi pulled out their fathers necklace, with wedding band still attached. He stepped forward straight away, and motioned for Gregg to lower himself a little so he could place the chain around his neck.

   Gregg, who was taller than Andi by almost a head in height, did so carefully as he kept an eye on the envelope. Something else was inside it, but he couldn’t work out what it could be.
   As soon as the clasp was secure, he reached out to see what it was, only to almost drop what it was when he saw it.
   Andi caught the pocket watch with both hands before it hit the floor, and breathed a sigh of relief.
   “How-?” he wondered aloud.
   “Dad-” Gregg began. “He asked me to look after something but wouldn’t let me see what it was. He slid it into my pocket, I completely forgot about it until now.”
   “Well, you’d better look after it then,” Andi said as he bit his lip gently. He then placed it safely in Gregg’s pocket, and placed the now empty piece of paper into the bin beside him.

-

   Gregg awoke later in Mike’s bed, in the late afternoon, to hear people talking downstairs. His friend’s bedroom was cool, with a refreshing breeze that was drifting through the open window to his right. He sat up slowly, and slid the pocket watch out to inspect it closer.
   Both Mike and Jennifer had insisted that he were to sleep on the bed, refusing to accept that he would be okay on the floor or pull out guest bed that they rarely used. Although grateful, Gregg did feel a little strange doing so.
   The silver metal was cold in his hands as he held it, but it didn’t bother him. He smiled instead, opening the clasp and watching the hands tick on perfectly in time from when he had wound it up from earlier on in the day.
   On the inside, he could see the individual cogs that helped the little piece of machinery to run smoothly, and he found himself transfixed as he stared at them.
   Facing the dial and hands, were words that he had chosen to be engraved for his fathers birthday three years earlier.
   ‘Our time together is just never quite enough. From Adalyn, Gregg and Andi.’
   Gregg closed his eyes as he clasped it shut once more, and fought the urge to turn it over and look at the secret compartment that hid something that his father refused to let him see until now. Instead he slid it once more into his pocket for safe keeping, and slid his legs over the side of the bed.

   The crutches that he was using to support himself were just within reach, so he wouldn’t have to stretch too far. It was however painful to lean upon them, especially as several of the cuts on his arm were still healing, which Gregg knew he had to bare as it was the only way he was going to be able to move around for a long while.
   He reached out for them and stood up gradually as he tried to make out what was going on downstairs, and carefully made his way into the hall.
   As he started to descend the stairs, Andi appeared in the doorway and made his way up a few of the steps to meet him.
   “Raye is here,” he said quietly. “She managed to get through to aunt Tabitha, she’s apparently going to take us in.”
   “I’m not sure if that’s good news or not,” Gregg mumbled.
   “Me either, I think Jennifer was hoping that we would stay with her as we don’t really know her all that much.”
   “She’s dad’s step-sister isn’t she? Mum always said they didn’t see eye to eye.”
   “That could be just a family thing though, I know we don’t usually,” Andi pointed out. “Anyway, she wants to talk about what’s going to happen next. I wanted to wait until you were awake first though.”
   Gregg smiled weakly and reached the bottom of the stairs just as Andi disappeared into the kitchen momentarily. He reappeared with a drink, which he took into the sitting-room and placed beside an empty seat.

   Gregg sat down beside it, taking a deep breath as he agknowledged Raye sitting at the other end of the room with paperwork once again in front of her.
   “Has Andi told you we have managed to track down your aunt-” she began.
   “-He has,” Gregg replied. “So you haven’t managed to get through to Adalyn or our aunt Marian at all?”
   “Unfortunately not no,” Raye frowned. Gregg and Andi looked to one another, wondering what this would mean for them both.
   “So, what happens now?” Jennifer asked.
   “They have asked that you both move to a temporary home until they are able to travel some time next week.”
   “Why can’t we stay here? It doesn’t make sense to move somewhere, and then again a few days later,” Andi asked.
   “I know it sounds strange, especially as they have listed Jennifer and Charlie as people to look after you both in their will if family can’t be contacted, but-” Raye paused. “-Considering they are willing to take you in, we feel it will be best to respect their wishes.”
   Gregg laughed out loud, causing everyone to stop and stare at him,
   “I’m sorry, but considering what’s happened, wouldn’t it make more sense to leave us here? I can barely walk at the moment, so why do we have to move twice because family we haven’t seen in years have asked us too?”
   “It’s just what they’ve asked of you two,” Raye replied.
   “Well when are they expecting them to move into this half way house?” Jennifer asked her.
   “Not a half way home, a temporary shelter between stays. I’ve made arrangements for the boys to travel today-”
   “-Today?” Gregg snapped. “Come on, we haven’t even been home to collect any of our clothes yet.”
   “Really? I would have thought that would have been the first thing you would have-”
   “-There were more important things to think about,” Andi cut in.
   Raye paused for a moment as she stared at Andi, collecting her thoughts as she did so.
   “Yes,” she spoke after a while. “I can’t change the plans now, they’re expecting you.”
   “This is a joke,” Andi laughed as he stormed out of the room.
   “Gregg, I know we may have stepped on each others toes when we first met-”
   “-You’re right there, but you’re certainly doing nothing to change my opinion of you,” he stated. Then sighing, he stood up and followed his brother upstairs once more.

-

   On the landing, he walked past Mike’s room where Andi was talking on the phone, and waited outside Heather’s bedroom. After knocking three times, he leant against the wall and listened as she shuffled around her room.
   Mike’s older sister answered the door after a few moments, and instantly gave Gregg a hug which he promptly returned. Her dark brown hair was down for a change, and flowing effortlessly over her left shoulder. He smiled weakly as he welcomed the affection, relishing in the warmth of her arms wrapped around his shoulders.
   “Mum asked me to keep an eye on your cuts whilst you were here, do you want me to check any over?” she asked as she pulled away slowly.
   Gregg thought for a moment and nodded, there was one that he was slightly concerned about.
   “On my right shoulder blade,” he said nodding. “Michelle covered it this morning but it’s still stinging a little when I move.”
   “I’ll get the first aid kit,” she said as she shuffled towards the bathroom.

   Gregg stepped inside her room and sat down on the footstool beside her bed. As he waited, he gazed around at the posters covering the walls. They were all images of musicians, apart from one just above her bed.
   “My dad took that photo on our last family holiday,” Heather explained. “It’s one of the few pictures we have with the five of us.”
   “I was just surprised to see it that’s all,” Gregg smiled weakly once more.
   The enlarged photograph that he continued to gaze upon, was of the Halo household five years ago. Heather was sitting beside a ten-year-old Mike and their parents, with a six-year-old little girl waving excitedly behind them all.
   “I know, mum and dad have their own way of dealing with Rosie’s death. Most of the pictures of her are hidden away in albums, it’s a shame really,” Heather admitted.
   Gregg turned so he was facing away from her, and lifted his t-shirt so she could look at the wound on his back easier.
   “Does Mike talk about her much?” he asked her.
   “Not as much as he used too,” she replied. “He mentions her occasionally, but he was rather young at the time, I’m not sure how much he remembers of her to be honest.”
   Heather then peeled the dressing away, and Gregg winced a little.
   “How does it look?”
   “It’s been bleeding a little, and it looks a little inflamed.”
   “Sleeping’s going to be fun then,” Gregg sighed as he rolled his eyes.
   Heather said nothing in return, as she instead focused her attention on gathering another dressing and supplies out of the medical box beside her.
   She worked in silence, cleaning the wound and covering it the best she could. When she was finished though, she wished that she could do more. Many of the bruises were only just starting to show signs of disappearing, especially the ones covering Gregg’s rib cage.
   “Does it hurt to breathe?” she asked him. “It really looks as though it does.”
   Gregg slid his t-shirt on once more, with Heather’s help, and nodded slightly.
   “A little,” he admitted. “The pain isn’t as bad as it used to be though, I was more worried about my leg then so I didn’t really pay attention to much else until they put a cast around it.”
   “So you’ve had trouble sleeping I bet, did they give you any pain killers or anything to help?”
   “The first night wasn’t actually that bad,” Gregg thought aloud. “It was the morning and days after where I really felt what happened. All the swelling showed up then, and most of the bruising on my legs and chest.”
   Heather wrapped her arms around Gregg, pulling him into yet another cuddle. He chuckled sadly and turned around to face her once more, as he hugged her back once more.
   
-

   To pass the time before they knew they were going to be asked to leave, Gregg and Andi decided to sit and watch movies in Mike’s bedroom, where they all sat in silence.
   Even though the door was ajar, they still all jumped a little as Jennifer knocked upon it.
   “Mum! you scared us,” Mike announced as he recovered slightly.
   “Sorry boys,” she said smiling gently.
   “Is it time to leave?” Gregg asked, without looking up.
   “Actually no,” Jennifer said as she leant against the wall. “I had a word with Raye after you went back upstairs.”
   “Oh?” Andi wondered.
   “You do still need to go to the temporary placement, but tomorrow instead. And after we’ve gone into town to pick you out a few things.” Jennifer explained. “As soon as we can get ahold of Adeline and your aunt Marian, she’s asked that you go to your parents place though.”
   “So we’re staying here tonight?” Andi confirmed.
   “Yes, so you’d better think of what you want for dinner because I need to start cooking it.”
   “Anything that isn’t hospital food,” Gregg joked quietly.
   Jennifer grinned and rolled her eyes playfully.
   “I think I can manage that,” she joked as she left the room.

{~}

   Jewel sighed peacefully as she lay back on her bed, smiling as the day was almost over. Although many of the boxes had yet to arrive due to a small delay during transit, the rest had either been unpacked or were waiting to be.
   All of the beds though, were the main pieces of furniture that had been set up and ready specifically so that her whole family could relax after the big move.
   She closed her eyes, finally happy that the journey was over, and nervous about starting a new school.
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Offline Saint

Re: ~Foundation: Introduction~
« Reply #33 on: March 11, 2019, 07:04:48 PM »
Characters are progressing nicely, keep it up.



... I want the raccoon. (Which you misspelt one btw, search for racoon and you'll find it.)

Offline Phoenix

:Chapter seven: Supportive connections.
« Reply #34 on: March 20, 2019, 12:09:56 PM »
   As Mike awoke the next morning, he was surprised to see that both Gregg and Andi were no longer in his room. He dressed quickly, picking up his mobile phone off the side table as he did so, and then made his way through the house.
   It didn’t take him long to realise that he was completely alone as there were no signs of life throughout, which made him a little confused. All the clocks that he passed showed that it was still early morning, so it wasn’t as though he had been asleep all day.
   Deep in thought, he moved into the sitting room and slid his phone out of his pocket, and scrolled through all of his contacts. One of them, and the person that he was hoping to speak too, was Julian Stockwell.

   The two of them were in many of the same classes at school, although Mike never really spoke to him much outside of it. He was doubtful of the eleven digits on his screen, as he realised that the number may not even be his any longer. He took a deep breath though, and readied himself for the potential inevitable dial tone that would show he was right.
   “Mike?” Julian answered. “Is that you?” he asked.
   Mike, now alert, leant forwards slightly and ran his free hand through his hair.
   “Yes, sorry-I wasn’t sure if this was still your number or not,” he replied.
   “Ah,” Julian paused for a moment and waited. “Was that all you wanted? It sounds like something’s wrong,”
   “Everything’s wrong,” Mike admitted. “I need your help,” he said as he took a deep breath.
   “Oh? What is it? I’ll help if I can.”
    Mike smiled, and could only hope that his plan would pay off.
   “You mentioned before that you knew someone in America, are you still in contact with them?”
   “Yes, I am actually.”
   “I need to get a message to someone,” Mike tried to explain. “-To some people, but we’ve been having trouble contacting them.”
   “I can try and phone my friend up and see if they can pass it on?”
   “They really need to be able to drive over to theirs if possible, her phone line is out and there really aren’t any other ways of getting through.”
   “I think I can persuade them to help me out, they owe me a favour,” Julian said happily. “What’s the message? And who is it for?”
   “It’s for Gregg and Andi’s older sister,” Mike sighed sadly.
   “Oh, I forgot she was over there too. From what I remember she’s actually not too far off where my friend Colin lives.”
   “That will be useful,” he said hopefully.
   “So what should I tell him?”
   “Their aunt’s family is over there too, they all need to fly back as soon as they can.”
   “Should I say why?” Julian asked a little, slightly worried.
   “Gregg and his parents were hurt in the storm,” Mike answered. He heard Julian gasp on the other end and closed his eyes as he continued. “Gregg’s okay, sort of-but their parents didn’t make it.”
   “Right,” Julian said as he spurred into action. Mike could hear movement over the phone, and after a minute or two he spoke once more. “Give me all the details you know, I’ll write everything down and contact him as soon as we hang up.”
   “Won’t he be a little annoyed with the early wake up?”
   “Maybe,” Julian replied. “But the last I heard he worked late nights, so he’s probably still awake right now.”
   “Thank you,” Mike said gratefully.
   He then walked across the room to the pile of paperwork that had been left behind for Jennifer to look through, sitting right on the top were Adalyn’s contact information and home address.

-

   After passing along all the information that he could to Julian, he then called three other numbers. This time, instead of explaining himself over the phone, he asked if they could come over to his house. They all agreed instantly, and assured him that they would be there soon.
   As he waited, Mike rummaged around the house for something to eat and moved outside into the back garden. To make it easier for his friends to enter, he unclasped the lock on the gate as he passed, and made his way to the patio area which was sheltered from the sun by several tall trees.
   Ryan showed up first, announcing his arrival with an almost exaggerated arm gesture that Mike found himself laughing at.
   He closed the gate behind him, and grinned with satisfaction.
   “I haven’t been over to yours in months, when was it? April or something like that?”
   “That sounds about right,” Mike replied nodding his head. “I’ve asked Courtney and Alex over as well,” he said as Ryan sat down.
   “That’s alright, it’ll be nice to see them again. I don’t think I have since we broke up for the Summer holidays.”
   “Me either to be honest, I know Courtney was away on holiday for the first week of August, but she’s back now.”
   “I am indeed,” her voice beamed. “And happy to be too, that holiday camp was a nightmare. It rained the whole time we were there,” she said complaining.
   Ryan laughed in reply, showing off the light in his bright blue eyes as he creased up with joy.
   “It’s not funny you know,” Courtney sulked playfully, taking her place beside Mike on the chairs.
   “Isn’t it? Who was it who said that that would happen on the last day of term?” Ryan grinned.
   Courtney thought for a moment, and then glared at him.
   “You,” she replied shaking her head smiling.
   Her light brown hair was styled neatly, with a small section at the front tied in a plait across the top of her head. The rest bunched together in a side ponytail, which was gliding down her left side.
   “Wait,” Ryan began as he began wondering to himself. “Were you right behind me walking up the driveway? I didn’t notice you,” he asked Courtney.
   “I was,” she snickered. “I was trying to sneak up on you, but you were walking too fast. My ninja skills are only as good as the speed that people are walking apparently,”
   She beamed once more as she saw Alex approaching, and stood up to hug each of her friends in turn.

   Once everyone was sitting down once more, Mike leant back on his chair unsure of how to approach the subject of why he had asked his friends to come over. Alex upon seeing this, smiled encouragingly, and sat back in his seat as well.
   “I’m not sure how long I have before my mum and-” he stopped as he waited to find the right words. “-But I’ll try and explain as quickly as I can.”
   Ryan shifted in his chair slightly, and turned all of his attention onto Mike.
   “What’s going on?” Courtney asked. “Is everything alright?”
   “No, not really,” Mike replied sadly. “I’ve asked you three here because you’ve been really good teaming up and organising things in the past. And I need you to do that right now.”
   “I think we can manage that,” Alex nodded. “What are we organising?”
   “A group of people, I’m not sure how many yet but quite a few.”
   “Are we all going to see something fantastic? Like a show?” Courtney asked hopefully.
   “No,” Mike replied as he hung his head. “Hardly anybody knows at the moment, it’s not exactly a secret but we wanted to make sure that Gregg was okay fully first.”
   “Is he? What happened?” Ryan asked, concern audible in his voice.
   “He was driving home with his parents in the storm-”
   “-Is he okay?” Courtney cut in. Even though he wasn’t looking at them, he could tell that each of them was visibly worried about the situation. Which was the main reason he couldn’t bring himself to look up.
   “Emotionally, right now honestly no I don’t think he is. He was the only one that made it out of the car that night,”
   Mike heard each one gasp with shock, and took a deep breath as he prepared himself for the questions he knew they’d ask.
   “Where is he?” Ryan wondered.
   “He’s with Andi and my mum in town, I think. They were all out before I woke up, so I’m not entirely sure though. I also don’t really know all the details but they’re apparently being taken to a temporary home before they move on to their aunts.”
   “Their aunt Marian? I love her, she gave me home-made fudge for my birthday once,” Courtney said hopefully. Mike shook his head, doubtful as he did so as he wasn’t entirely sure. He hadn’t wanted to know, due to being angry that they hadn’t been able to stay with his family, and so hadn’t asked.
   “I think it’s with his other aunt, they’re still trying to track down his sister from what I’ve heard too, so I’ve asked someone else to see if they can get hold of her in America.”
   Mike then sat in silence, listening as they discussed the best way of contacting. The only indication that he was paying attention, was to nod when they asked if they were gathering everyone for the funeral.

{~}

   Andi stepped out of the car and looked out onto the perfectly manicured lawn, and sighed sadly. It simply didn’t make sense to either of them that they couldn’t stay with Mike and his parents until their aunt arrived, but what else could they do?
   The house in front of them wasn’t what he had expected, although that wasn’t hard. Neither of them had asked about it, other than what time they would have to be there. Other than a rather ominous first impression, it was a well looked after building.
   The single story building was surrounded by flowers and trees in full bloom, which made Andi frown a little as he remembered how his mother had loved gardening too.

   Gregg shifted his hair slightly, so that the wound on his head was hidden slightly and opened the car door on the other side. Raye was by his side within moments, trying to help as he reached for his shoulder bag that was beside him.
   “I’m alright,” he halfheartedly stated, not quite believing himself as he spoke.
   Andi glanced at the two of them and walked around the outside of the car to the boot, and peered inside.
   There were three suitcases in all, two smaller ones and a slightly bigger one which had the majority of their clothes in. He picked the first one out without a word and began to reach for the next when he heard someone approaching.
   “Raye, I’m glad you made it okay,” a woman said as she neared the three of them.
   “Traffic was horrible on the way over, I they’re doing more clear up work in the town centre,” she explained.
   “Ah, that would be why you were a little late, I was starting to wonder.”
   “Gregg, Andi-” Raye began as she indicated to them both. “This is Caroline, she will be looking after you until your aunt Tabitha arrives, and we can sort out your living arrangements after.”
   Gregg stood up painfully and gave her a brief smile, which she returned somewhat gratefully.
   “I’m so sorry for your loss,” she said sympathetically.
   Gregg immediately looked away and gazed at the floor, wondering as he did so how many people would say it throughout their lives.

Offline Phoenix

Re: ~Foundation: Introduction~
« Reply #35 on: March 29, 2019, 11:24:50 AM »
I'm now working on chapter 10, but I don't want to post more until people have caught up with where the story is at right now.  :ninja:
I am looking for people to go through what I have, so if you can spare a little time it would mean a lot to me if you let me know what you thought.

Offline Phoenix

Re: ~Foundation: Introduction~
« Reply #36 on: June 05, 2019, 10:06:28 AM »
  • Read Later
  • I started fifteen back in April, but stuff has happened-and I've been distracted which is why I haven't finished it yet. Life..stuff. You know.

    I can post more if people have caught up though. We're sitting at chapter seven so far, and I have fourteen complete overall so far.